烤鸭们，你的雅思小作文写的过关吗？
烤鸭们，你的雅思小作文写的过关吗？
2016年3月3日 石家庄春辉雅思培训
雅思小作文历来是雅思考试中最为薄弱的一项。 坦白讲，大多数学的小作文写的简直就是乱七八糟。
发表这篇范文的目的在于抛砖引玉，大家可以讨论，争论甚至予以批评。但是目的只有一个：希望大家能够通过学习提高写作成绩。
范文的题目在Cambridge IELTS 7, TEST 1, WRTING TASK 1. PAGE 30. 大家可以翻开书与题目对照着看。
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下面是范文：
The diagram categorizes well the major difference of expenditure on a variety of consumer goods among five countries in 2002. Overall, the statistics reveals a disproportionate pattern.
Though people in all these five countries : Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey, uniform ally spent their major income on food, drinks and tobaccos, the cost in Ireland and Turkey was at the leading position, about 30% averagely. But the expense in the rest of countries appeared to be far low this level, at more or less than 17%. So there was an apparent and wide gap between these European countries.
On the other hand, the expense of wearing and fun and education, by comparison, proved to be far low, but quite similar. Generally, that of wearing accounted for only about 6% of income in these countries exception in Italy, where requires 9%, 3 percentage points higher than the average. Similarly, the spending on leisure activity and study only fluctuated within a gap between 2%-4%.
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